A poem about a girl

A wild flower, rare, beautiful, and surprising.
She stands strong and distinguished amongst the rest.
Her natural yet subtle beauty entrancing,
The clarity of Nature once again is manifest.

The analogy yields to the beauty within,
Visions of an infinitely complex fractal recursion fall short.
All attempts to describe implode before they begin,
Analytically intractable, impenetrable by thought.

Her honest curiosity humbles me.
Through layers of warmth, I see beyond her smile.
Volition and intellectual acuity; a reminder,
She kowtows to no-one, yes I like this girls style.

From the moment I heard the first word from her lips,
I wondered whether I was seeing a mirage,
Upon getting closer my expectations were eclipsed,
A prison break, release, my feelings were at large.

What to do I asked myself, if only she would reciprocate my affection,
With ruffled complexion, I'm tortured by my minds misdirection,
Neuronal circuits put it to the vote but there is no election.
To divide and to section, to solve with mechanical perfection,
that's what my mind strives for, its built to relentlessly question

The mystery prevails, can she and will she cure this infection?

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Comments

Awesome !!

This was just pure awesomeness.. especially the last stanza has come out so smooth and easy... too good

About ashely's peom

I love your peom me and my friend are doing a poetry slam at your school on friday 4-27-2012. And we deceid to write your own and recite it and your poem incouraged us to stand in front of an audience and recite & perform our poem

That's really kind of you to

That's really kind of you to say so. I'm glad you enjoyed it and felt inspired to write and produce you're own.

I'd love to hear what you wrote.

Thanks :)

Thanks :)

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